is this good English

[snade17]

Hello dear experts, Could you tell if the sentence below sounds OK in English?

"Ttuberculosis is now a disease that is spreading at threatening pace worldwide, which makes it a real problem not only of today but of tomorrow as well."

 

[albertino]

Hello dear experts, Could you tell if the sentence below sounds OK in English?

"Tuberculosis is now a disease spreading worldwide at a threatening pace , which poses a real problem not only of today but also of tomorrow ."

(Not a teacher)

 

[snade17]

Thank you very much!