is this good English

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snade17

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Hello dear experts, Could you tell if the sentence below sounds OK in English?

"Ttuberculosis is now a disease that is spreading at threatening pace worldwide, which makes it a real problem not only of today but of tomorrow as well."
 

albertino

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Hello dear experts, Could you tell if the sentence below sounds OK in English?

"Tuberculosis is now a disease spreading worldwide at a threatening pace , which poses a real problem not only of today but also of tomorrow ."
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snade17

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Thank you very much!
 
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