is this piece of text ok?

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jctgf

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hi,
is this piece of conversation OK?

if you have any available time tomorrow I can bring you the machine so you can take a look at it and, I'm sure, get amazed by it.

thanks.
 

riverkid

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hi,
is this piece of conversation OK?

if you have any available time tomorrow I can bring you the machine so you can take a look at it and, I'm sure, get amazed by it.

thanks.

The choice of 'get' in the phrase 'get amazed by it' wouldn't be my choice but other than that, it seems okay, JC. {some wouldn't use 'okay' as I have here}
 
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