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[Riaan]

Hallo,

Is there anything about this sentence that is not correct?

"It’s essentially a devout film and it put many people off, primarily those who had been expecting an action packed flick abound with slimy, green monsters not unlike Independence Day"

Thank you for the wonderful service! :up:
Riaan

 

[bhaisahab]

Hallo,

Is there anything about this sentence that is not correct?

"It’s essentially a devout film and it put many people off, primarily those who had been expecting an action packed flick abound with slimy, green monsters not unlike Independence Day"

Thank you for the wonderful service! :up:
Riaan

"It’s essentially a devout film and it put many people off; primarily those who had been expecting an action packed flick abounding with slimy green monsters, not unlike Independence Day."

 

[Riaan]

Thank you, sir.:-D