is this sentence all right?

[hooootdog]

"There were two restrictions placed on me during a visit. first, i could not go anywhere in the hosital without McDonald's personnel as well as hospital personnel. That way, if i were to walk into a room and frighten a child, there was someone there to deal with the issue immediately."

i doubt if the sentence should be like "if i were to walk into a room and frighten a child, there would be someone there to deal with the issue immediately.

thank you!

 

[Tdol]

I think both forms are OK.

 

[Raymott]

"There were two restrictions placed on me during a visit. first, i could not go anywhere in the hosital without McDonald's personnel as well as hospital personnel. That way, if i were to walk into a room and frighten a child, there was someone there to deal with the issue immediately."
If I were to walk into a room and frighten a child, Ronald McDonald would jump out of a closet with a Happy Meal, thus beginning the child on the endless path of eating fatty foods as a comforter.

R.