is this sentence correct

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if god ever asked me how to make this world a better place i will certainly tell him to give everyone such a remote.
 
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shwetank said:
if god ever asked me how to make this world a better place i will certainly tell him to give everyone such a remote.
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If god ever asked me how to make this world a better place, I would certainly tell him to give everyone such a remote. Such a remote what?
 
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I'd also capitalize God.
 
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