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[Unregistered]

Finally, the things that make becoming an accountant awesome: the money is great and I have a list of toys to buy, job security is good and if democrats are in office there will be more job opportunities because all accounting jobs are related to taxes, it is what I like to do.

 

[billmcd]

Correct in terms of truth? Debatable. Correct in terms of grammar? OK. Correct in terms of punctuation? Missing a few commas, a period and a capital letter.