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[Zoe2008]

I cannot login to the system of retail link, even unsuccessful to create the other new password, pleas help.

 

[David L.]

Firstly, can you explain these in simple terms:
system of retail link
the other new password

'other' than what? What are you referring to here? What are you trying to do in the log in process?

 

[Anglika]

I cannot login to the system of retail link, even unsuccessful to create the other new password, pleas help.

I cannot access the link to the system for retail, and have been unsuccessful even when trying to create a new password. Please help.