Is this sentence correct ?

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Zoe2008

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We would like to order 4200 pcs of iPod connectors; 4000 pcs for POxxx, and 200 pcs are 5% add spare, please confirm
 
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As a Brit, but not a teacher, I would have said:

We would like to order 4200 iPod connectors; 4000 are for POxxx, with the remaining 200 (5%) as spares. Please confirm.
 
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