A pivitol time in my life it was suddenly evident I merit time to stop and smell the roses.
R renee h Guest Feb 14, 2008 #1 A pivitol time in my life it was suddenly evident I merit time to stop and smell the roses.
Hi_there_Carl Member Joined Aug 25, 2007 Member Type English Teacher Feb 14, 2008 #2 no... it is a mess... Try it this way.... When I finally took time to stop and smell the roses it was a pivitol time in my life.
no... it is a mess... Try it this way.... When I finally took time to stop and smell the roses it was a pivitol time in my life.
R RedMtl Guest Feb 14, 2008 #3 renee h said: A pivitol time in my life it was suddenly evident I merit time to stop and smell the roses. Click to expand... Hello Carl's correction is excellent. If, however, you wish to draw attention to the "pivot" rather than the roses, you could use: "As it was a pivotal time in my life, it was suddenly evident to me that I owed myself the time to stop and smell the roses."
renee h said: A pivitol time in my life it was suddenly evident I merit time to stop and smell the roses. Click to expand... Hello Carl's correction is excellent. If, however, you wish to draw attention to the "pivot" rather than the roses, you could use: "As it was a pivotal time in my life, it was suddenly evident to me that I owed myself the time to stop and smell the roses."