is this sentence grammaricly correct?

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renee h

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A pivitol time in my life it was suddenly evident I merit time to stop and smell the roses.
 

Hi_there_Carl

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no... it is a mess...

Try it this way....

When I finally took time to stop and smell the roses it was a pivitol time in my life.
 
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A pivitol time in my life it was suddenly evident I merit time to stop and smell the roses.

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Carl's correction is excellent. If, however, you wish to draw attention to the "pivot" rather than the roses, you could use:

"As it was a pivotal time in my life, it was suddenly evident to me that I owed myself the time to stop and smell the roses."
 
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