Is this sentence ok?

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Nightmare85

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Hello,
Today I imagined this sentence:
The problem is, that you, as an outsider, don't know what actually happened in our relationship.

Is this sentence good?
I'm not fully sure if "in our relationship" is correctly placed.

Cheers!
 

billmcd

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Looks OK to me.
 

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Hello,
Today I imagined this sentence:
The problem is, that you, as an outsider, don't know what actually happened in our relationship.

Cheers!
I would remove the comma after "is".
 

beachboy

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Me too.
NOT A TEACHER
 
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