is this text ok?

[fnsc]

"that's the best I can get under manual mode.
the difference has tapered off, but still exists.
what's your pick?"

hi there,
is the text above OK?
the context is someone emailing a friend about some pictures taken with the new camera. the receiver is supposed to chose one of the photos sent.
thanks.

 

[RonBee]

It looks fine to me.

 

[susiedqq]

Is it:

That's the best I can get using manual mode.