Is this the right English?

[Anonymous]

Hello Teacher,

is this right english?

Our yard Duisburg received on 25.09.04 by truck...
We have arranged outstanding payment.
We have cancelled your invoice-No. 12 dd. 25.09.04 about USD 10,00.

 

[Casiopea]

Hello Teachers,

Are these correct?

Our yard Duisburg received on 25.09.04 by truck...
We have arranged outstanding payment.
We have cancelled your invoice-No. 12 dd. 25.09.04 about USD 10,00.

Hello :hi:

What about?

1. Our Duisburg yard received by truck on 25/09/04....
2. We have arranged payment for the outstanding_______.
3. We cancelled invoice No. 12dd., re: USD 10,000, on 25/09/04.

All the best,