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Hi, I'm writing a report and I need to know if my report title is correct:

Implementation of Paperless Offices by Using Intranet

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It's hard to judge a title that is disconnected from the text, but don't you mean "by using the Internet"?
 

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Implementation of Paperless Offices by Using Intranets

I prefer this. ;-)
 

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That's probably what she had in mind.

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How about 'Implementation of Paperless offices through Intranets?? ;-)
 

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You could also puch the boat out and go for something like 'Intranet based implementation of paperless offices.'

PS- how about 'paper free'? ;-)
 
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