It seems that nowadays people have days of frantic activities.

yi-ing

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Hi.

Is this sentence correct?

It seems that nowadays people have days of frantic activities. They shop at a frantic pace in shopping areas, for example.
 

jutfrank

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There are two sentences. Neither is very well phrased.

The problems with the first are:

have days
days of activities
frantic activities


The problems with the second are:

shop in shopping areas
for example
 
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