Jim has moved to a new company

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Jim has moved to a new company, and unlike in the previous, where his career stagnated, he now fares well.
 

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I would add a comma after 'and' and add 'one' after 'previous'.
 

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I'd use "at the previous", not "in".
 

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Do I need to add "one" after "previous," or could it be dropped?
 
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