Jim has moved to a new company

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Jim has moved to a new company, and unlike in the previous, where his career stagnated, he now fares well.

 

[Matthew Wai]

I would add a comma after 'and' and add 'one' after 'previous'.

 

[emsr2d2]

I'd use "at the previous", not "in".

 

[Bassim]

Do I need to add "one" after "previous," or could it be dropped?

 

[Matthew Wai]

https://books.google.com/ngrams/gra... previous one is;,c0;.t1;,the previous is;,c0
'The previous one is' vs 'the previous is'.