Just a day before her wedding

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Just a day before her wedding, Maria decided to cancel it. Her inner voice told her that the man she were supposed to marry was not the right one.

 

[GoesStation]

It's the man she was supposed to marry. I'd use about to though.

 

[Bassim]

Would my second sentence be OK like this?

Her inner voice told her that the man she was about to marry was not the right one.

 

[GoesStation]

Yes, I like that version much better.

 

[emsr2d2]

I might end with "Her inner voice told her that her fiancé was not the right man for her".

 

[jutfrank]

You can use the phrase call off a wedding, instead of cancel.