Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
I am not sure if my sentences are grammatically correct or if they sound natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?
Just as hopes faded that a lost child would ever be found, a group of shepherds accidentally came across him. He was dehydrated and confused but otherwise in good health.
Just as hopes faded that a lost child would ever be found, a group of shepherds accidentally came across him. He was dehydrated and confused but otherwise in good health.