[General] Just as I have come in

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Will17

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Hello,

Can you tell me if this sentence makes sense, please?

"Just as I've come in, I noticed changes".

Thanks a lot for you help

Will
 
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HanibalII

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Will17 said:
Hello,

Can you tell me if this sentence makes sense, please?

"Just as I've come in, I noticed changes".

Thanks a lot for you help

Will
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It does, but it could be improved on.
 
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