Just verify.pls.

[samfat33]

Could anyone please write to me if there are any mistakes in the following or if you can replace any sentence with a better one.

Q1. What can we find around the community centre?
A1. We can find busy streets and crowded homes around the community centre.

Q2. Is there a badminton court at the centre?
A2. Yes, there is a badminton court at the centre.

Q3. Why does Ah Pin go straight to the table-tennis room when he reaches the centre?
A3. Ah Pin goes straight to the table-tennis room when he reaches the centre to join the other boys in table-tennis.

Q4. What does the coach help the better players to do?
A4. The coach helps the better players to improve in table-tennis.

Q5. Who teach the girls to sew, cook or dance?
A5. Ladies at the centre teach the girls to sew, cook or dance.

Q6. Why were some rocks given to the centre?
A6. Some rocks were given to the centre to build rock garden at the centre.

 

[Anglika]

Could anyone please write to me if there are any mistakes in the following or if you can replace any sentence with a better one.

Q1. What can we find around the community centre?
A1. We can find busy streets and crowded homes around the community centre.:up:

Q2. Is there a badminton court at the centre?
A2. Yes, there is a badminton court at the centre.:up:

Q3. Why does Ah Pin go straight to the table-tennis room when he reaches the centre?
A3. Ah Pin goes straight to the table-tennis room when he reaches the centre to join the other boys in table-tennis. ...in a game

Q4. What does the coach help the better players to do?
A4. The coach helps the better players to improve in table-tennis....to improve at table tennis/to improve their game.

Q5. Who teach the girls to sew, cook or dance?
A5. Ladies at the centre teach the girls to sew, cook or dance.:up:

Q6. Why were some rocks given to the centre?
A6. Some rocks were given to the centre to build rock garden at the centre.
...build a rock garden there

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[RonBee]

Say:

Who teaches the girls to sew....?

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~R