just wondering

robin lee

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Is this sentence right?

I am looking for a part-time job and just wondering if there are a lot of part-time jobs in the market now.
 

teechar

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Is this sentence right?

I am looking for a part-time job and just wondering if there are [STRIKE]a lot of[/STRIKE] many part-time opportunities these days. [STRIKE]jobs in the market now.[/STRIKE]
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probus

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I agree that the sentence as rewritten by Teechar is far more natural. But in all fairness to the OP, it should be acknowleged that his/her original sentence is intelligible to all fluent speakers and contains no grammatical errors.
 
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