[Grammar] Kelly, Daniel and Tiffany were hidden in the guest room.

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kelly, Daniel and Tiffany were hidden in the guest room. Matt waited for Sam watching TV on the couch. At 9.10 the bell rang.

Thanks

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kelly, Daniel and Tiffany were [STRIKE]hidden [/STRIKE] hiding in the guest room. Matt [STRIKE]waited for Sam[/STRIKE] was watching TV on the couch while he waited for Sam. At 9.10, the bell rang.

Thanks.

See above.

 

[GoesStation]

Who was watching TV?

You need a comma after 9:10 ("9.10" in BrE).

 

[teechar]

"Hidden" is possible but unlikely for your context. It would imply that somebody else hid them; that they didn't hide themselves.