[Grammar] Kelly, Daniel and Tiffany were hidden in the guest room.

Nikitus

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kelly, Daniel and Tiffany were hidden in the guest room. Matt waited for Sam watching TV on the couch. At 9.10 the bell rang.

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kelly, Daniel and Tiffany were [STRIKE]hidden [/STRIKE] hiding in the guest room. Matt [STRIKE]waited for Sam[/STRIKE] was watching TV on the couch while he waited for Sam. At 9.10, the bell rang.

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See above.
 

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Who was watching TV?

You need a comma after 9:10 ("9.10" in BrE).
 

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"Hidden" is possible but unlikely for your context. It would imply that somebody else hid them; that they didn't hide themselves.
 
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