[Grammar] Kelly smiled at the question

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Nikitus

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kelly smiled at the question of the stranger, because he had a strange expression in his face. She feeled that he had a crush on her."

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SoothingDave

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"Stranger's question" is more natural.

"On his face"

"Felt"
 
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