kill bill

[bosun]

If you see any problems, can I have your comments?

Kill Bill is the best film he has ever directed. There are a lot of actions and cruel scenes in this movie. But the actions look so real and fascinating.

 

[David L.]

Kill Bill is the best film he has ever directed. There are a lot of actions and cruel scenes in this movie. But the actions look so real and fascinating.
Kill Bill is the best film he has ever directed.
There is a lot of action and scenes of cruelty in this movie.

But the actions look so real and fascinating.
but: used to introduce something contrasting with what has already been mentioned.
What is being contrasted?
I think you are implying that the action doesn't seem staged, contrived, but has a sense of reality about it. This is not made clear in the sentence.

 

[anreak]

Kill Bill is the best film he has ever directed. Although/Despite the fact that there is a lot of action and cruel scenes for my taste, the movie looks so real and fascinating.

Is this good teachers? :-D