Kindly check my sentences..

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1. If he would have/had been there I am sure he would have taken the decision within a fraction of a second.
2. There are 115,000 high net-worth individuals in India and there are over 400 millions people living below poverty line, will a country like India would be able to bridge the gap ever?
3. What would you do, if you have been in a situation, where you could either save your life or kill your opponent?
4. Once in a week try to look within yourself and you will be surprised that you will actually get the answers to all your questions

 

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1. If he would have (/had) been there I am sure he would have taken the decision within a fraction of a second.
2. There are 115,000 high net-worth individuals in India while (and there are ) over 400 millions people live (ing) below poverty line. Would (will) a country like India be able to bridge the gap ever?
3. What would you do, if you were (have been) in a situation, where you could either save your life or kill your opponent?
4. Once in a week try to look within yourself and you will be surprised that you are/will actually getting/get the answers to all your questions.

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