Kindly check the sentences

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new2grammar

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Fake money can come from across the border, but they can never cross the radar of Kores Fusion

Now no fake currency can incur loss to you in your business.
 

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This is how I would have written it:
(If I were you ;-))

Fake money can come from across the border, but [STRIKE]they[/STRIKE] it can never cross the radar of Kores Fusion.

Now no fake currency can incur loss to [STRIKE]you in[/STRIKE] your business.

I hope I'm right :)

P.S: I don't like the Now in sentence 2, what do you guys think?

Cheers!
 
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