Kindly correct the following sentences

[JRD]

Out of 10 maintenance work , 8 were approved by the client and given to QS department accordingly.09 and 10 were given for client's approval.

 

[Anglika]

Out of 10 maintenance work , 8 were approved by the client and given to QS department accordingly.09 and 10 were given for client's approval.

My reading of this:


Of 10 proposals for maintenance work, eight were approved by the client and passed to QS department for implementation. #9 and #10 are still awaiting client approval.

 

[JRD]

Thank you