Can you please correct the following sentences...
Please note that the following new personnel will be joined our maintenance team tomorrow, Monday, January 28, 2008 as we discussed
1 Name. xxx
2 Name. xxx
Also, note that a car will hire on 01/2/2008 as per our programme or
Also, note that we will hire an additional car for the transportation, it'll take on 01/2/2008.