Kindly correct the following sentences

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Please note that the following personals will be commenced their duty tomorrow, Monday, January 27, 2008
 

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Please note that the following peronnel will be commenced their duty tomorrow, Monday, January 27, 2008
 

JRD

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Can you please correct the following sentences...

Please note that the following new personnel will be joined our maintenance team tomorrow, Monday, January 28, 2008 as we discussed

1 Name. xxx
2 Name. xxx
Also, note that a car will hire on 01/2/2008 as per our programme or
Also, note that we will hire an additional car for the transportation, it'll take on 01/2/2008.
 
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