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The height of creativity - When you do not have any idea or concept to promote your brand then the only solution is to show competitor’s product in bad light or inferior to your product. This is the case of Rin ad who have taken extremely bold decision of show competitor’s product; tide packet in the ad. In the long run it would dampen the reputation of Rin.
 

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The height of creativity - When you do not have any idea or concept to promote your brand then the only solution is to show competitor’s product in (a)bad light or as being inferior to your product. This is the case of Rin ad who have (which has)taken (an) extremely bold decision of show (showing a)competitor’s product; tide (??) packet in the ad. In the long run it would dampen the reputation of Rin.

I wouldn't call this creativity though.
 

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The height of creativity - When you do not have any idea or concept to promote your brand then the only solution is to show competitor’s product in a bad light or as being inferior to your product. This is the case with (of) Rin (ad)who have taken an extremely bold decision to (of) show competitor’s product; Tide packet in the ad. In the long run it would dampen the reputation of Rin.
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I couldn't associate the title with the rest of the text. Maybe you should have called it "The Lack of Creativity"
 

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I couldn't associate the title with the rest of the text. Maybe you should have called it "The Lack of Creativity"

Yes, it could be the lack or absence of creativity.
 
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