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jasonlulu_2000

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Those who don’t behave themselves, not only leave others bad impressions, but also affect the learning environment and joyful atmosphere.
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Should I change it as "Those who don’t behave themselves, not only leave a bad impression on others, but also affect the learning environment and joyful atmosphere.?

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Jason
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Those who don’t behave themselves, not only leave others bad impressions, but also affect the learning environment and joyful atmosphere.

Should I change it as "Those who don’t behave themselves, not only leave a bad impression on others, but also affect the learning environment and joyful atmosphere.?

Thanks

Jason

Your edit sounds better and is more natural.
 
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