Let it come, let it grow

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bianca

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Let it come, let it grow

There's so much peace up here
As we're gliding in the night;
Our bodies disappear
out of mortals' dismal sight.

We are holding hands so tightly,
Stretching arms to touch the sky,
Underneath, the world is sleeping
As we're given wings to fly.

Hairs fluttering, shirts waving,
Rising high and swooping low,
I don't want to stop this craving -
Let it come, and let it grow...

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Hairs fluttering, shirts waving,
Hovering and swooping low,
I don't want to stop this craving -
Let it come, and let it grow...

What is amazing Bianca. I love it. I don't know I always feel some appetite in your writing.
Luuuuuuuuuve it.
 

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dear friend,
could you tell me the rules to write a poem in general????
 

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dear friend,
could you tell me the rules to write a poem in general????

Are you talking bout rhythm, ryme and such like?
I don't know about any rules. A poem has a message that touches heart and mind.
 

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Let it come, let it grow

There's so much peace up here
As we're gliding in the night;
Our bodies disappear
out of mortals' dismal sight.

We are holding hands so tightly,
Stretching arms to touch the sky,
Underneath, the world is sleeping
As we're given wings to fly.

Hairs fluttering, shirts waving,
Rising high and swooping low,
I don't want to stop this craving -
Let it come, and let it grow...

bianca

Very nice write! (poet slang for - I enjoyed reading your poem)

On the surface I had the impression of Peter Pan leading children across the sky. As I read it again and again it says so much more.
 
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bianca

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Very nice write! (poet slang for - I enjoyed reading your poem)

On the surface I had the impression of Peter Pan leading children across the sky. As I read it again and again it says so much more.

Thank you! IMO, a poem is a bottomless pit - of meanings.
And I wish you A Happy New Year! :)
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So great writing. Wonderful pictures. What a high spirit you have. I do like it. It sounds like praying. Keep the good work going on.
 

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Underneath, the world is sleeping

So nice, I love it




 

hinou

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yes Bianca i am talking bout rhythm, ryme and such like,
if you know rules about them tell me ok i am waiting your answer friend
 

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Let it come, let it grow

There's so much peace up here
As we're gliding in the night;
Our bodies disappear
out of mortals' dismal sight.

We are holding hands so tightly,
Stretching arms to touch the sky,
Underneath, the world is sleeping
As we're given wings to fly.

Hairs fluttering, shirts waving,
Rising high and swooping low,
I don't want to stop this craving -
Let it come, and let it grow...

bianca
How nice , Bianca:-D
I think it is a kind of a mystical experience that you are leading.
It seems like a playful poem but it has a dark side as you try to express that the world is plunged in a deep sleeping. I would say that this long and continuous sleeping is associated with ignorance. Many people are ignorant so that they are unable to be up and they are always dawn: underneath.They are narrow_minded, unable to use their imagination and capacities and not able to make their life better. In short, they have paralyzed and frozen minds no longer able to imagine and create new things.
Only those who understand and know the " savoir vivre"( the art of how to live) can lead a happy life full of suprises and; by using their imagination they can exceed all bounds to fly ,touch the sky and make their lives much happier and make sense.


I really love it:up:

I.A;-)
 
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