Letter Declining a Job Offer

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hampeh

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Hi,

[FONT=&quot]I just got two job offers from different company. It’s really hard for me to make a decision which one should I choose. After careful consideration, I chose ABC over XYZ. Both companies are my dream to work with and I don’t want them to blacklist me next time I want to work with them.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Herewith, sample of the rejection letter for XYZ. Appreciate so much should you can proof read it.[/FONT]



Manager
Human Resource Department
(Address of employer)

Hampeh
(My home address)

January 20, 2008

Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you very much for offering me the position of Consultant with ABC. It was a difficult decision for me, but unfortunately I have accepted a position with another company before your offer came in.

It was very frustrating to know that I have to turn the offer down. Therefore, I really hope that ABC would consider me another time. I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to interview me and to share information on the opportunity and your company.
Again, thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,



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(Hampeh)
 

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Human Resource Department
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Hampeh
(My home address)

January 20, 2008

Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you very much for offering me the position of Consultant with ABC.

Unfortunately, I had accepted a position with another company before your offer came in.

I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to interview me and to share information on the job opportunity and your company.

Again, thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

________________________________________________

I would keep it short!
 

hampeh

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Dear Susiedqq,

Thank you for your prompt reply. I really appreciate it.
I most agree with you. The reason I wrote it long is because I wanted to emphasize my keen interest towards both companies, especially company XYZ. I wish not to be blacklisted by them. Kindly be informed that I still interested to work at XYZ in the future. Would it be a way to write to them without pissing them off?
 

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Name of Manager
Human Resource Department
(Address of employer)

January 20, 2008


Dear Sir/Madam, You have been interviewed, so you must have a name - use it!

Thank you very much for offering me the position of Consultant with ABC. Unfortunately I had accepted a position with another company before your offer came in.

I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to interview me and to share with me information about the position and your company. I very much hope that at some future time we will be able to come to an arrangement whereby I shall be able to work with you.

Again, thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,



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