Letter of Appreciation

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Deepurple

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Dear Teachers, I would be grateful if you could examine the following draft of appreciation letter to see if it is all right in diction or style, etc. Thank you.
Letter of Appreciation
On behalf of the ABC Association,
I am writing to convey our deep appreciation to
(Name)
member of ABC Environmental Club
in recognition of
his dedicated effort and contributions during our
“(Title of the event)”
charity event for (an organisation) held on Saturday, 30th February 2008.
Without his whole-hearted participation and assistance,
I believe the event would not have been
so successful and perfect.
Thank you again.
Chairman of ABC Association
 

RonBee

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That is very good, except I would remove and perfect. Then it would be perfect.
;-)
 
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