jackinside
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can you correct my letter please?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to apply for the Master’s Degree in Biotechnology in which I am particularly interested.
I hold a 4 year BS degree in the fileds of Bioengineering, the first Bioengineering Deparment in Turkey, from – University.
My aim is to work in an international field related to Industrial Biotechnlogy and Bioprocess Engineering. Therefore I would like to gain a deeper theoretical and practical knowledge in fields of Control Systems in Fermentation and Bioprocess. I believe a university with a high reputation like --- is the best place to achieve my career objectives.
My Professional background is compromised of three years of technical and managerial experience. I have two years of relevant accomplishments in the Pharmaceutical Industry within operations, engineering and manufacturing.
I have worked in --- Marketing Company,(-----) for 15 months. I worked in Technical Service Department as Bioprocess Engineer.
I have been still working ---- Production Marketing Company (Turkey) since January 2008.
The following outlines pertinent aspects of my career;
Substantial background in product and process development.
Significant experience and accomplishments in Water purification systems (Distillation, Deiyonization, Reverse Osmosis).
Significant experience in Cold/Hot water systems (+37 C and +4 C systems).
Significant experience in Steam and air systems (Sterile steam and air).
Significant experience in Freeze Drying.
Significant experience Extraction, Evaporation,and Purification (Chromotography Technics)
In conclusion I would like to say that I like to take responsibility and to work as part of a team. I am eager to gain new experiences and in my opinion this program is the best way to achieve that.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration, I will look forward for your response.
Best regards.
_____________
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to apply for the Master’s Degree in Biotechnology in which I am particularly interested.
I hold a 4 year BS degree in the fileds of Bioengineering, the first Bioengineering Deparment in Turkey, from – University.
My aim is to work in an international field related to Industrial Biotechnlogy and Bioprocess Engineering. Therefore I would like to gain a deeper theoretical and practical knowledge in fields of Control Systems in Fermentation and Bioprocess. I believe a university with a high reputation like --- is the best place to achieve my career objectives.
My Professional background is compromised of three years of technical and managerial experience. I have two years of relevant accomplishments in the Pharmaceutical Industry within operations, engineering and manufacturing.
I have worked in --- Marketing Company,(-----) for 15 months. I worked in Technical Service Department as Bioprocess Engineer.
I have been still working ---- Production Marketing Company (Turkey) since January 2008.
The following outlines pertinent aspects of my career;
Substantial background in product and process development.
Significant experience and accomplishments in Water purification systems (Distillation, Deiyonization, Reverse Osmosis).
Significant experience in Cold/Hot water systems (+37 C and +4 C systems).
Significant experience in Steam and air systems (Sterile steam and air).
Significant experience in Freeze Drying.
Significant experience Extraction, Evaporation,and Purification (Chromotography Technics)
In conclusion I would like to say that I like to take responsibility and to work as part of a team. I am eager to gain new experiences and in my opinion this program is the best way to achieve that.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration, I will look forward for your response.
Best regards.
_____________
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