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bosun

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Can you correct any mistakes in the following sentence?

To:Library Director
Re: Library systems.

.. there are only 30 positions to use the laptop and as you know this is not enought. I hope you can increase the number of computer positions, so that more students can use thier laptops in the library.
 

Niall

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Can you correct any mistakes in the following sentence?

To:Library Director
Re: Library systems.

.. there are only 30 positions available to use laptops and as you know, this is not enough. I hope you can increase the number of computer positions, so that more students can use thier laptops in the library.

I believe this is what you mean. Even though it slightly changes the meaning of the first sentence, judging by the context, I think this is what you meant to say.
 
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