Linda made a New Year's resolution to slim down

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Linda made a New Year's resolution to slim down. She could not keep it, but that didn't bother her at all because soon she married a handsome man.
 
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Maybe omit the word "soon". It seems a little out of place.
 

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It lacks a final punctuation mark.
 

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Rover_KE

Thank you.
For some reason, the "Thank" does not function after the forum has been upgraded this morning. I hope this is just a small bug which will disappear.
 
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