peter123
Senior Member
- Joined
- Sep 13, 2007
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Malaysia
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
Hi there,
Please proofread the following sentences.
One day, I was lining up at the check-out counter at a supermarket. Someone jumped the line. A lot of people on the line scolded him. He felt very embarrassed and walked to the end of the line. Someone came up and asked me if it was the line for credit card or cash. I told her it was for cash not for credit card. I was not sure if the one standing in front of me was lining up because she left the line and suddenly came back with some goods. so I asked her if she was walking in the line.
thanks
pete
Please proofread the following sentences.
One day, I was lining up at the check-out counter at a supermarket. Someone jumped the line. A lot of people on the line scolded him. He felt very embarrassed and walked to the end of the line. Someone came up and asked me if it was the line for credit card or cash. I told her it was for cash not for credit card. I was not sure if the one standing in front of me was lining up because she left the line and suddenly came back with some goods. so I asked her if she was walking in the line.
thanks
pete