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robin lee

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Are there any grammar errors?

I have to move out of my apartment by November 30, 2017, therefore I have made changes to my work schedule. My work days are XX, YY and ZZ. I apologize for the short notice.
 

teechar

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I have to move out of my apartment by 30 November [STRIKE]30,[/STRIKE] 2017, [STRIKE]therefore[/STRIKE] so I have made changes to my work schedule. My work days [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] will be XX, YY and ZZ. I apologize for the short notice.
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Rover_KE

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I'd leave November 30 as is. As a BE speaker, I favour 30th November​, but there's nothing wrong with the original.
 

teechar

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There's one less comma with the "30" in front.
 
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