Making sentence with 3 actions.

[khurdull]

1. I sent my money from my another bank account to another.
2. I sent my money via wire-transfer
3. It has not delivered yet.

so i made this : The money i sent from my another bank account to another via wire-transfer have not delivered yet

I find this sentence very unnatural but making perfect sentence is beyond my ability. i need your help .. please help me...

 

[GoesStation]

I believe wire transfers always go from one bank account to another. Thus you can simplify the sentence: I think the money I sent by wire transfer hasn't been delivered yet.

 

[emsr2d2]

1. I sent my money from my [STRIKE]another[/STRIKE] bank account to another.
2. I sent my money via wire-transfer.
3. It has not been delivered yet.

[STRIKE]so[/STRIKE] I [STRIKE]made[/STRIKE] wrote this: The money I sent from my [STRIKE]another[/STRIKE] bank account to another via wire-transfer [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] has not been delivered yet

I find this sentence very unnatural but [STRIKE]making[/STRIKE] writing a perfect sentence is beyond my ability. I need your help. Please help me.

See my corrections above. It's important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I".

You used "my another" twice. Note that there is no context in which that is correct.

 

[khurdull]

Thank you emsr2d2. The explanation came very clear to me.