Maria remembered when she was a child

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Maria remembered when she was a child how her father took her often to a funfair to ride a pony.

 

[Rover_KE]

[STRIKE]'... took her often ...'[/STRIKE] '...often took her...'

 

[GoesStation]

I'd move how so that it follows remembered.

That would be better, but it would require that "when she was a child" be offset with commas. It would become a parenthetical clause, if I'm using the right terminology.