Maria remembered when she was a child

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Maria remembered when she was a child how her father took her often to a funfair to ride a pony.
 

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[STRIKE]'... took her often ...'[/STRIKE] '...often took her...'
 

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I'd move how so that it follows remembered.
That would be better, but it would require that "when she was a child" be offset with commas. It would become a parenthetical clause, if I'm using the right terminology.
 
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