Maria sees her move to London as a pivotal

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Maria sees her move to London as a pivotal moment in her life. Born in the countryside, she suddenly found herself in the metropolis where all dreams seem to come true if you work hard and have a strong will.
 

Tarheel

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Maria sees her move to London as a pivotal moment in her life. Born in the countryside, she suddenly found herself in a city where all dreams come true if you work hard and have a strong will.

Yes, but you might try my suggested alternative.
 
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