JACEK1
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- Feb 10, 2013
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- Polish
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Hello all members!
The preliminary versions of the below-mentioned sentence read as follows:
The official beginning of building of the passenger and car ferry for customer X started with the ceremony of laying the keel on New Vulcan slipway on the premises of Industrial Park of Y town.
and
The official beginning of building of the passenger and car ferry for customer X was started by the ceremony of laying the keel on New Vulcan slipway on the premises of Industrial Park of Y town.
The ceremony of laying the keel on New Vulcan slipway on the premises of Industrial Park of Y town marked the official beginning of building of the passenger and car ferry for customer X.
Which version is the most suitable?
What is your opinion?
Thank you.
I support the bolded sentence.
The preliminary versions of the below-mentioned sentence read as follows:
The official beginning of building of the passenger and car ferry for customer X started with the ceremony of laying the keel on New Vulcan slipway on the premises of Industrial Park of Y town.
and
The official beginning of building of the passenger and car ferry for customer X was started by the ceremony of laying the keel on New Vulcan slipway on the premises of Industrial Park of Y town.
The ceremony of laying the keel on New Vulcan slipway on the premises of Industrial Park of Y town marked the official beginning of building of the passenger and car ferry for customer X.
Which version is the most suitable?
What is your opinion?
Thank you.
I support the bolded sentence.
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