Migration, which involves a whole array of social

angelsrolls

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Hello,

Could you please check the English I used in the following sentence?

Migration, which involves a whole array of social, cultural, security, administrative and legal dimensions, is an issue that governments need to resolve.

And this one?

Migration means to move from one place to another around the world, either in a collective or individual manner and it has caused governments not only to struggle with human groups who cross the border, stay in the country or reside in it permanently but to interact with them in the name of humanitarian aid.
 

Sue01

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Re: Could you proofread it?

Hi,

All I would do is put a comma after permanently. Other than that, I wouldn't change or correct anything!

Sue
 
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