Hello.My name is Dona. i have for homework to write a for and against essay about mobile phones. i wrote something, but i don't know if it is ok.. please help me 
Mobile phones are some kind of multimedia device that let us enjoy all the comforts. Mobile phones can be vital, convenient and cost-effective for people who want to stay connected all the time. In the recent years the number of mobile phones that are already bought is growing. Many claim that this is because more and more people can’t live without mobile phone.
One of the major advantages of the mobile phones is that you can be able to be connected with everyone in every single moment of the day. In addition to this, if you are lost or for example you had a car accident, you can call someone to help you. A further advantage is that if you are bored you can listen to music, play games an also you can take and make pictures (if you have a camera on the mobile phone); not to mention the fact that almost every mobile phone has a blue tooth and infrared, so you can send pictures, video clips or any kind of music in a really easy way.
However, there are many disadvantages. On the first place are the potential healths issues, such as damaging you ear, supposed cancer if you have or use blue tooth and also possible headaches from too much talking and just using the mobile phone. On the second place is the risk of a car accident, if you talking or sending sms when you are driving. Many people are using the camera for bad things, like taking a picture of a naked person and even recording a porn film.
All things considered it seems to me that the mobile phones are not devices that we should be afraid of, if we are using them on a good way. So just to avoid the risk, I think that we should use the mobile phone for essential calls and text/picture messaging.
Mobile phones are some kind of multimedia device that let us enjoy all the comforts. Mobile phones can be vital, convenient and cost-effective for people who want to stay connected all the time. In the recent years the number of mobile phones that are already bought is growing. Many claim that this is because more and more people can’t live without mobile phone.
One of the major advantages of the mobile phones is that you can be able to be connected with everyone in every single moment of the day. In addition to this, if you are lost or for example you had a car accident, you can call someone to help you. A further advantage is that if you are bored you can listen to music, play games an also you can take and make pictures (if you have a camera on the mobile phone); not to mention the fact that almost every mobile phone has a blue tooth and infrared, so you can send pictures, video clips or any kind of music in a really easy way.
However, there are many disadvantages. On the first place are the potential healths issues, such as damaging you ear, supposed cancer if you have or use blue tooth and also possible headaches from too much talking and just using the mobile phone. On the second place is the risk of a car accident, if you talking or sending sms when you are driving. Many people are using the camera for bad things, like taking a picture of a naked person and even recording a porn film.
All things considered it seems to me that the mobile phones are not devices that we should be afraid of, if we are using them on a good way. So just to avoid the risk, I think that we should use the mobile phone for essential calls and text/picture messaging.
