Modern English Style

[Tdol]

"Please be assured that I am escalating this interaction to the concerned department for initiating proactive approaches on improving this feature."

In response to a customer complaint about their email account.

 

[MW]

Written by a lawyer or someone anal retentative. Oops - same thing? lol

I think it is meant to impress, but it really doesn't.

 

[Francois]

What does it have to do with being anal retentive? (yes, I know the expression, lol)
IMO this is just business verbiage riddled (by definition) with buzzwords. And they talk all day long about communication skills *sigh*.

FRC

 

[Tdol]

It's pretty grim. ;-)

 

[Masfer]

re

I am used to listening to this kind of speeches.
You should listen to my proffesors at the university ! :lol:

 

[Tdol]

What's your degree in?;-)

 

[Masfer]

re

I am going to start my last (?) year in Computing Engineering.
Some of my teachers boast about their knowledge and use as many technical words as they can.

 

[Tdol]

I don't mind technical terms when there is a need- but this sentence is just unnecessarily wordy. ;-)