Modifier problem

[Help K]

Do i have a modifier problem with this sentence?

When I was five, my great-grandfather came to visit for the first time.

 

[apex2000]

'.....came to visit me/us for the first time'.

 

[velimir]

Hello,

I would like to ask would it be natural also :

When I was five, my great-grandfather came for a visit for the first time.

Thanks

Velimir

 

[Anglika]

I don't have a problem with your original sentence. However, a better phrasing is "came on a visit for the first time".