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- Mar 10, 2013
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Please take a look at this sentence. If the commas are in the srong places please tell me which, and why. I really want to get to grips with this because it's snapping me. I think that its fine personally, but my mind is playing tricks.
"That speculation turned out to be more than speculative when he was released, and despite Kansas City reportedly trying very hard to hammer out a new deal, Dorsey ultimately ended up in San Francisco. "
"That speculation turned out to be more than speculative when he was released, and despite Kansas City reportedly trying very hard to hammer out a new deal, Dorsey ultimately ended up in San Francisco. "