More than twenty years after Bob killed a man

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Is it correct to use "jab at" in this sentence?

More than twenty years after Bob killed a man in a brawl, his troubled conscience still jabbed at him
 

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It doesn't work for me.
 
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