More than twenty years after they graduated

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

More than twenty years after they graduated from university, Marta and Ivana's paths crossed on a seminar in Italy. The coincidence was they married on the same day, their husbands had the same profession, and they had the same number of children.

 

[emsr2d2]

I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

[STRIKE]More than[/STRIKE] Having not seen each other since they graduated twenty years before, [STRIKE]after they graduated from university,[/STRIKE] Marta and Ivana's paths crossed on a seminar in Italy. [STRIKE]The coincidence was[/STRIKE] They discovered that they had married on the same day, their husbands had the same profession, and they had the same number of children.

See above.

 

[teechar]

Marta's and Ivana's paths

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[Tdol]

I would use in/at a seminar, not on.