Motivation Letter for Master's degree (scholarship)

kennai

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My passion for data science started when I took a short course at a computer institute in Thailand. I learned that data science is a powerful tool that can help businesses analyze. the mass of data that they deal with and to make decisions.

I don't know why you can't mention the name of the country. As for the school, don't they want people to know about them?

It's a draft letter.
 

Tarheel

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Because I had no background in the data area, I gained more experience with that with my previous companies and joined online classes from various websites.
 

Tarheel

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If machine learning isn't capitalized there's no reason advanced machine learning would be.
 

smith25

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Are you talking about capitalization?
 
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