motivation letter to joining a program

ataniaratuatsiilah

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i need your kind help :cry:
i want joining a program and need motivation letter to send tomorrow
Where the program has a goal that is

Provide opportunity for youth leaders to build networking with parties in different countries so that they can be inspired to become great leaders in their fields of interest
Provide base for culture exchange to grow stronger relations across nations and deeper understanding towards diversity of culture
please help me, i really need your kind help thank you
hope you reply
 

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​I need your [STRIKE]kind[/STRIKE] help. :cry:
I want [STRIKE]joining[/STRIKE] to join a program and need a motivation letter to send tomorrow.
[STRIKE]Where[/STRIKE] The program's [STRIKE]has a[/STRIKE] goals [STRIKE]that is[/STRIKE] are:

Provide an opportunity for youth leaders to build [STRIKE]networking[/STRIKE] networks with parties in different countries so that they can be inspired to become great leaders in their fields of interest.
Provide a base for [STRIKE]culture[/STRIKE] cultural exchange to [STRIKE]grow[/STRIKE] create stronger relations across nations and a deeper understanding [STRIKE]towards[/STRIKE] of the diversity of cultures.

Please help me. I really need your [STRIKE]kind[/STRIKE] help. Thank you.
I hope you will reply.

As you now know, we don't write letters for people.

Please look at my corrections above. It is important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
 
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